The Precision of the Knife
Plath’s Sharp Image
I am closing this month with Sylvia Plath. Regardless of one’s feelings on her themes, her technical precision is undeniable. She had a way of using sensory detail like a knife—sharp, cold, and absolutely certain. She never “padded” her imagery; she chose the one detail that would make the reader flinch.
As the month ends, I’m looking at my own work for that kind of “unforgiving” detail. It is easy to be soft in our descriptions, to use generalities that comfort the reader. But the images that linger are the ones that have an edge. We should aim for the kind of precision that makes the page feel dangerous.
The Monroe Minute
Look at your workspace right now. Identify the one object that looks most “honest” or “sharp” today. Write three words to describe it.
Until the next page,
Sloane S. Monroe