Tag: Editing


The Revision That Saves the Book

A single cut, made with courage, can restore an entire manuscript.

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The Discipline of Looking Twice

Meaning often emerges on the second glance.

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Where Meaning Hides When You Stop Explaining

Sloane notices how removing a single explanatory sentence deepens the reader’s involvement.

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The First Draft’s Burial

You must be willing to lose the work you love to find the work that lasts.

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The Muscle of the Sentence

Strong verbs provide the skeletal structure for any narrative.

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Pacing Through Punctuation

Commas and periods are the musical notation of prose.

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Editing for Breath

Your sentences should allow the reader to breathe at the right intervals.

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The Sound of the Page

Every word has a physical texture that the reader ‘hears’ in their mind.

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The Comma as a Musical Rest

Punctuation is not a matter of grammar; it is a matter of pace.

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The Weight of the Adverb

If a verb is doing its job, the adverb is unemployed.

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